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Is the following a run-on sentence? Is there even such a concept in German?

Was wir machen, hängt von euch ab, vor allem soll es darum gehen, euch zu zeigen wie ihr Verschlüsselung benutzen könnt, um eure Kommunikation abzusichern.

Should it be the following (my emphasis)? Should there be a comma after Vor allem?

Was wir machen, hängt von euch ab. Vor allem, soll es darum gehen, euch zu zeigen wie ihr Verschlüsselung benutzen könnt, um eure Kommunikation abzusichern.

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There are run-on-sentences in German (the single subsentences have to be separated with a comma). A classical example would be the translation of Cesar’s “veni vidi vici”: “Ich kam, ich sah, ich siegte.” Whether your example is one, depends on as to whether you classify vor allem as a conjunction here. Either way, the example is correct but it could also be split into two sentences before vor allem, only changing the pace but not the meaning.

In either case there should be no comma after vor allem since it is no construction that requires or allows a comma (subordinate clause, extended infinitive, parenthesis, something being followed by a contrasting conjunction, …). This is in contrast to English where many adverbial constructions at the beginning of a sentence can or have to be separated with a comma.

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How is "Ich kam, ich sah..." a run on sentence? That would make any sentence that lists activities a run on sentence. "Ich habe eingekauft, ich bin zum Arzt gegangen und ich habe meine Wohnung aufgeräumt." –  Emanuel Jan 22 at 11:09

Well, both are possible solutions. It's up to you to choose one. But the first one is easier to read. I'm not sure about the comma.

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