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I want to write a letter for a language school and to ask them about the English courses they offer. I need a course to improve my English for sending Emails and making telephone calls (Work reasons). I made a try and it looks like this:

Ich würde im nächsten Jahr einen Englischkurs bei Ihnen besuchen, denn mein Job erfordert sehr gute Englischkenntnisse für geschäftliche E-Mails und Telefonate zu haben.

Would this expression "aus geschäftlichen Gründen, geschäftliche E-Mails schreiben, Telefonate annehmen usw" fulfill the purpose?

If you have any Ideas, write them please.

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  • The question would be OK if it were about taking a German course. Just kidding. It would also be off-topic. – RHa Apr 7 at 21:21
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Other than the typo, it's a proper sentence. Still it's a bit stiff (but not wrong!).

I'd write:

Ich möchte (a tad more polite and binding. würde sounds too optional) im nächsten Jahr einen Englischkurs bei Ihnen besuchen, denn mein Job erfordert sehr gute Englischkenntnisse für geschäftliche E-Mails und Telefonate.

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    I would avoid the word Job in almost all circumstances. Job in German sounds like something you do without any comitment. A Job (in German) you do only, and only, in order to earn some money, but you would leave it as soon as possible. Better say: in meinem Beruf... Of course you can be working in such a Job, but as you consider learning English for it, this is unlikely. – Christian Geiselmann Apr 7 at 8:58

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