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How often do you see two or more prepositional phrases in one clause?

For example, I was reading the LA Times and was curious how a sentence would translate in German. Google translated it like this:

“Premierministerin Theresa May hat wiederholt versprochen, das Land aus seiner jahrzehntelangen Mitgliedschaft im 28-köpfigen Block in eine glänzende, prosperierende Zukunft zu führen.”

This is unusual, right?

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    Not at all. Google Translate did it right. – Janka Apr 29 '19 at 12:12
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    It is not unusual per se, but this sentence, in that form, would not make its way into a (good) newspaper. It is too twisted. The reader, even an intelligent one, gets lost while reading. Not least because of the famous German postposition of the verb. So, for a newspaper, this sentence needs re-grouping. Moreover, 28-köpfiger Block (for the EU, as we can suppose) is a nonsense metaphor; nobody uses this, and thus a newspaper wouldn't. Blöcke do not have heads in German. – Christian Geiselmann Apr 29 '19 at 15:48
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    Moreover, glänzend und prosperierend is overdone. Delete any one of the adverbs, and the sentence keeps totally its meaning. So, one is redundant and would be edited out. – Christian Geiselmann Apr 29 '19 at 15:55
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    Since there is only a limited number or non-adverbial complements (subject, object etc.) for any given construction, any sentence of a certain length is practically forced to have multiple adverbials (prepositions, adverbs, etc.) if it wants to give additional information. – Kilian Foth Apr 30 '19 at 6:26
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    In a newspaper the sentence may be unusual, but in scientific or literary writing it would not be unusual at all. – RHa Apr 30 '19 at 7:59
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This is not at all unusual.

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